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Episode 33: Over the Falls

Campaign, Episode 33

Episode 33, Escape Artist

Color, Digital

Art/Story: Jeff Lee

Editor: Mike McMenemy

Script

Panel 1

Wide shot, Allosaurus rears up in pain. Goblins panicking. Fiann is thrown from her mount. From over the cliff, you see the Allosaurus tail sweeping over the cliff. The cage and its occupants tumbling into open air along with the goblin captors.

Benk: Ha Ha Ha Ha

Panel 2

Close up on Fiann’s face, upside-down looking angry.

Fiann: You will not escape me!

Panel 3

Close up on Zindello’s face, looking annoyed.

Zindello: Benk, what were you thinking!?

Panel 2

Close up on the Triceratops’ face, looking scared.

SFX: HONK!!

Creator’s Corner

This page was originally just a splash page. Working with an editor has made my pages look 10x better than working alone. This one’s dedicated to Mike!

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